In this alternative review of TMF I wanted to consider some parts of the
text in more detail, rather than the broad sweep of the admittedly complex
story line.
Sam Spade, the central character and archetype of the hard-boiled American detective, is emotionally stunted. He shows no grief
whatsoever at the death of his partner, Miles Archer, and avoids telling
Archer’s wife, who he has been having an affair with, about his murder. Hammett shows this in the constant references to Spade's lack of reaction and his woodenness. His only
reaction is to tell his secretary to “Have the Spade & Archer taken off the
door, and Samuel Spade put on” (398)
Hammett is really good at noticing the small, subtle movements we all
make which convey emotion or intention but which are easily missed. Here for example Spade's client, Brigid Shaugnessey, picks up his hat:
“She came back and stood in front of him
holding the hat, not offering it to him, but holding it for him to take if he
wished”. (My emphasis)
The difference in the two ways of holding a hat here is slight,
but in a novel where every word counts Hammett conveys a lot about Brigid and
her relationship to Spade – she is a consummate performer, and knows offering
him the hat would convey “let’s go”, whereas “holding it for him to take if he
wished” is a more passive gesture, conveying “let’s go?”, giving him control of the situation. Later, in the
eponymous chapter, Brigid is described while Spade rolls yet another cigarette:
“She put a finger-tip to her mouth, staring across the room
at nothing with widened eyes, and then, with narrower eyes, glanced quickly at
Spade. He was engrossed in the making of his cigarette. ”Oh yes”, she began,
“of course –“ She took the finger away from her mouth and smoothed her blue
dress over her knees. She frowned at her knees."
This is extraordinary writing. Hammett uses these small
movements, even down to the width of her pupils, to tell us so much about what
is going on. Brigid has widened her eyes as part of her seduction technique.
She narrows them to glance at Spade, who is studiously ignoring her
performance. The fingertip to the mouth is a classic sexual invitation,
mimicking fellatio. When this doesn’t work she moves to smoothing her
dress, drawing her attention down to her legs and groin. She is an expert
temptress, using her sexuality to get what she wants. Later,
after they share a supper of sausage, (little subtlety there!), “Spade’s arms went
around her, holding her to him, muscles bulging his blue sleeve, a hand cradling
her head, its fingers half lost among red hair, a hand moving groping fingers
over her slim back. His eyes burned yellowy” (453). She has won – or has she? (Incidentally, I am not sure about the word "yellowy"). He knows she didn’t have the gun under her pillow, because her pillow didn’t stay in place all night, suggesting that their sex was reasonably active. Pretty racy stuff for 1920’s American literature?
I'm going to write separately about the parallels between The Maltese Falcon and the writing of Raymond Chandler, but for now, while Hammett can’t hold a candle to Chandler when it comes to crafting a phrase, few can, I should acknowledge that there are still some treasures here. For example he describes Brigid’s eyes as “cobalt-blue prayers”, which I thought was extraordinary. There is also the description of the Fat Man, which was one of the best descriptions of obesity I can remember reading:
“The fat man was flabbily fat with bulbous pink cheeks and
lips and chins and neck, with a great soft egg of a belly that was all his
torso, and pendant cones for arms and legs. As he advanced to meet Spade, all
his bulbs rose and shook and fell separately with each step, in the manner of
clustered soap bubbles not yet released from the pipe through which they had
been blown. " Clustered soap bubbles – isn’t that fantastic?
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